Monday 28 October 2013

Improvement ideas after the rough cut

From our audience survey we found that to improve the strength of our storyline we need to show the two main characters doing more rebellious and/or illegal things. As a group we quickly brainstormed some ideas, we came up with;




•Drinking -we could put water into an empty vodka bottle.
•Drug abuse -we decided agents this.
•Starting fires -we could do this at night on the beach but weren't sure on how the lighting would work.
•Setting off fireworks -this would probably be too dangerous.
•Smoking -we thought the smoke from the cigarettes would look really good on camera. 
•Spitting 
•Swearing -this would be hard to show with no sound.
•Slashing car tyres -we couldn't make this look effective without actually doing it.
•Graffiti 

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