Final story idea

We decided against our first video idea because the narrative wasn't strong enough. After presenting the idea to the class and getting some feedback, it became apparent that the video wasn't appealing and the narrative wasn't clear enough to understand. After incorporating new ideas into our own, we realised that it was in fact the idea of the party that was holding us back. After taking time to rethink our storyline, we took out the party scene and added another protagonist - a girl. Our new idea is based on Breakfast At Tiffany's; the idea of a couple escaping their normal, 'dull' lives to do lots of crazy things together. We will aim for the video to be cyclical; beginning and ending at the same place. This will mean that the video will be subjective to the viewer and they can decide what actually happened.